GaTech Essay advice

<p>Can a couple of people here (preferably if you're at Tech now, but you don't have to be) look over my Georgia Tech supplement essay? I think I may have not covered enough because I write sort of descriptively and it has to be 150 words or less.</p>

<p>Leave a comment if I can pm it to you. Thanks</p>

<p>Sure. I shall help if art is worthy:D</p>

<p>Honestly you need to be careful about letting people on the internet read your essays.At the very least read through a bunch their posts to make sure you sort of understand that who they are. I know this seems paranoid but better safe than sorry. I certainly wouldn’t have wanted my DS to have others he didn’t know have his essay.</p>

<p>Yeah, I’m aware that plagiarism is a possibility, so I just make sure I check whether or not the person is applying to the same school(s) I am and I wasn’t planning to send it out to more than a couple people. In any case, muhammad provided me with some good constructive criticism which saved my essay from sounding a little cliche. But I understand what you mean and I’ll make sure I pay attention to who reads it. I just wanted someone I don’t know to read it because in the end, the adcomm doesn’t exactly know you personally and may not understand certain aspects as well as my college counselor.</p>