General questions for both the Common App and UC transfer essays
I’m in great academic standing at my current cc but I need help with topics and writing style on my Common App essay
- Is it cheesy to start off my essay with a recipe? It’s related to my childhood (i.e. something my parents taught me how to make) that sets the anecdote I use in my essay but my sister said starting off like that is really cheesy
I can’t give advice on any Cal university, but you might want to be objective with your transfer CommonApp essay. Believe me, I know the temptation to write a novel is strong but admission officers want to see that you have at least an idea of want you’ll be doing throughout your years at their colleges. Be concise.
As for college-specific essays… Sure, you can have a bit more creative freedom, if the prompt allows. Good luck!