Decision: Accepted
Early action into School of Nursing and Health Studies
Objective==========
SAT I (breakdown): 780 reading, 760 math – 20 on essay
ACT (breakdown): N/A
SAT II: 750 math II, 750 bio m, also a 700 math II (whoops i did worse 2nd time)
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 3.79
Weighted GPA: 4.54
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): N/A
AP (place score in parenthesis): did not send AP’s but here it is anyways:
Psych(5), Lang(5), Stat(4), Calc BC (4), Calc BC-AB subscore(5), US Gov(4), CS(3)
IB (place score in parenthesis):
Senior Year Course Load: Hon eng 12, Sports Statistics, Education Statistics, Immunology, Yoga, Ceramics 2, Adv Earth Science, Marine Biology, Organic chemistry, Neuroscience
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): 2nd Place MD DECA for the Integrated Marketing Campaign[qualified for itn’l], 5th place national for GirlsGoCyberstart cybersecurity competition, AP Scholar
Subjective===========
Extracurriculars (place leadership in parenthesis):
- DECA(Chapter president and Cofounder)
- SilverQuest, literary magazine (Photography Editor)
- Biology Team
- Yoga and Rock Climbing
- Science national honor society
Job/Work Experience:
- Mathnasium intern
- IT firm intern
- Self-employed tutoring gig
Volunteer/Community service: Teen court jury (20 hours), Art camp(180 hours), other volunteer things but did not note on the application (i have like 350+ hours)
Summer Activities: taking care of 2 younger siblings and teaching them, IT internship in 10th, Art camp counselor in 9th, tutoring in 11th
Essays (rating 1-10, details): It’s hard to rate my own essay but my essay was on the more creative side. I used a yoga sequence and tied it to different aspects of my life, a bit different than the usual narrative-form college essay.
Recommendations (rating 1-10, details):
Teacher Rec #1: waived, bio teacher in 10th grade and marine bio 12th ~8
Teacher Rec #2: waived, lang teacher in 11th and helped start DECA ~9
Counselor Rec: got a new counselor senior year, ~7
Additional Rec: N/A
Interview: It went very well! We did not have much in common but it was an interesting conversation, nonetheless. The interview ran for roughly 80 minutes.
Other
Applied for Financial Aid?: Yes
Intended Major: Human Sci with pre-med focus
State (if domestic applicant): MD
Country (if international applicant):
School Type: Magnet for Science, Math and Computer Science - very competitive
Ethnicity: Asian
Gender: Female
Income Bracket: Lower Middle Class
Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): First gen
Reflection
My GPA was dragged down by some family difficulties during my freshman year but other than that I think my application was decent. I wished I spent more time on my supplements since it was much weaker than the main essay.
Strengths: Good SAT, First Gen, Leadership in DECA and having the club advisor to attest to both my academic skills and leadership skills in DECA
Weaknesses: Below average GPA, weaker supplement, extracurricular did not reflect my interest in healthcare very well
Why you think you were accepted/waitlisted/rejected:
I think my SAT scores, main essay and teacher recommendations were pretty good. I conveyed to my interviewer that GU was my top choice