Georgetown Essay #2-Critique?

College Essays
1

<p>This is the personal statement. Any help is greatly appreciated.</p>

2

<p>Bumpity bump</p>

3

<p>I’m a 2015 applicant, but I’m not applying to Georgetown. If you feel safe sending it me, I’ll take a quick look at the essay if you include the prompt.</p>

4

<p>Bumpersssssss</p>

5

<p>buuuuuuuuuump</p>

6

<p>I’ll take a look</p>

7

<p>Thanks for the help</p>

8

<p>I’m a 2015 applicant as well, but not applying to Georgetown. Go ahead and send it to me if you’d like extra proofing.</p>