Georgetown Essay-Critique?

<p>Just finished up an essay for Georgetown about what extracurricular activity was most significant to me. Anyone willing to critique it is greatly appreciated.</p>

<p>Any takers?</p>

<p>Thank you!</p>

<p>I’ll take a look :)</p>

<p>I’ll edit it if you pm it to me.</p>

<p>PM me yours, and i’ll edit it it if you edit mine?</p>

<p>PM me it if you’d like.</p>

<p>Thank you very much, guys; I’ll send you all the essay. And yes, I can do editing in return.</p>

<p>ill take a look at it and edit it for errors and grammar pm me it</p>

<p>You can PM it to me!</p>

<p>Ill read. PM</p>

<p>I can take a look if you’d like. PM it over.</p>