<p>For my essay topic, I want to write about my expieance as Girls State really helped my come out of my shell.
Problem 1:
I seem to be writing more about the other girls
Problem 2:
Nothing seems to be jumping out at me when I write
Problem 3:
I'm not sure how this will appeal to the admissions people.</p>
<p>Good advice on college essays:</p>
<p><a href=“http://www.virginia.edu/undergradadmission/writingtheessay/html[/url]”>www.virginia.edu/undergradadmission/writingtheessay/html</a></p>
<p>I’m a Boys Stater (Senate President FTW) …</p>
<p>I’d start the essay at your house (cuz it’s summer) and how boring and plain your are (or in the shell)… then you go to GS and develop (describe it, the relationships built with the girls)… then end at home and contrast to where you were a week earlier.</p>
<p>But, that’s just me.</p>
<p>I started off my intro by describing standing in front of my town preparing to give a speech, using a lot of imagery. </p>
<p>Now I just have to make what I did there seem interesting.</p>