Give me as much criticism as possible!

College Essays
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<p>Care to edit 3 short (200 word) essays?</p>

<p>Post and I will pm you.</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look if you would like. Email the essays to me as attachments. <a href="mailto:missmibster@yahoo.com">missmibster@yahoo.com</a></p>

<p>(It might take a few days for me to get back to you though, I have a few essays lined up)</p>

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<p>bump</p>

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<p>E-mail them to me…I’ll be an honest critique: <a href="mailto:girlspanky@windowslive.com">girlspanky@windowslive.com</a></p>

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<p>mo mo more</p>

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<p>bump</p>

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<p>ill read them!</p>