Good Enough For USC?

<p>I recently finished my USC essay, and would like ppl to comment on it very brutally if they find something wrong with it. Also, i need u to tell me what picture do u get of me when u r finished reading? </p>

<p>THANKS for ur time =)</p>

<p>sure thing. send it over and ill edit and critique. wont steal :D</p>

<p>ty northface…anyone else…? =D</p>

<p>arg Fisho your essay is very hard to understand/edit ha</p>

<p>rlly =O Whats hard in it? =O</p>