Good idea for my essay?

College Essays
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<p>I'm half Pakistanian, half French, living in the US. Does anyone think that it would be a good idea to write about how my point of view on a lot of things is very different than others because of the fact that my own family lives in such a dangerous area of Pakistan, and how their education isn't as good, etc.? I wanted to talk about how having a family over there makes me appreciate a lot of what I have here, and how thats also what motivates me to make the best out of my life, etc. </p>

<p>What do you think?</p>

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<p>Like any topic, it’s as good as you make it. I can see a lot of ways that could be interesting and a lot of ways it could be cliche.</p>

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<p>It has the potential to be a good essay, but it all depends on how you write it. I know that is probably not the answer you were looking for, but it’s true. WHy don’t you just start writing, and post it here - I’ll give you feedback if yo ulike.</p>