My APUS teacher is kind of lack luster in my opinion, and doesn’t do a very good job of grading and giving comments on essays. I’ve taken APWH and consider myself to be pretty good at essay writing, but I’m definitely not perfect. However, a few days ago I wrote an in-class essay on a topic I knew hardly anything about. I got an 100 and zero comments on it. When I asked why there weren’t any comments he said that if you got an 100 that means nothing needs to be changed. I highly doubt this was the case with my essay and I really think he was looking more at tone than content. Is there anyone on here who would like to read, score, and critique my essay? It’s about 6 pages double-spaced handwritten, probably less typed. It’s an FRE about progressive reforms. Or does anyone know of another good site to post apus essays for critique?</p>
I can read it for you, check your PM box!</p>
Rose,</p>
Let me know what parts of the APHG course your class has covered so far. I can post a free response question comparable to what is on the exam. You can post or email me your response and I can give you some feedback.</p>
Dr. Jon Moore
Author of Princeton Review’s
Cracking the AP Human Geography Exam</p>