Grade Detriments

[guglielmo0810]

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@Masterus

Unlike you, my teachers taught me another way of writing essays. From the social studies portion of my classes I learn that you aren't writing as well. The teacher was a language arts teacher which is why she graded the hardest in our entire school. We learned to use primary documents to explain in our essays. Explaining is the most important aspect of an essay in my perspective.</p>

<p>The fish ricochet on the surface of the ocean. Therefore, excaping heavy predatory species. Many predators stay away from the surface ,but some like the dolphin enjoy caprioles or in their perspective, dancing on the ocean's surface. Their skin exhibit a shiny ,but luminous sight. They are easily constituted with human's sights.

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<p>So they ricochet ON the surface of the ocean? I was under the impression they swam, to ESCAPE predators. </p>

<p>That was a stupid response to the little fish meets ocean argument.</p>