<p>. . . and vocabulary. Just so you know, "neccisant" isn't a real word.</p>
<p>Also, there is no subject to persuade you, You should see essays from my school's students then. What you are trying to say is complex vocabluary is a hindrance. That isn't the truth. Well, college essays aren't persuasive are they? No, they tell them about yourself, expressing youself.</p>
<p>That was suppose to be "have a neccesity".</p>
<p>Yes you are. You're trying to persuade them to accept you.</p>
<p>In an essay, you are trying to prove a point without being too wordy while trying to have the least amount of words, but at the same time proving and explaining your point of view.</p>
<p>BTW, who says "Why would I have a necessity to cry?" How many times have you ued the word "hindrance" already? You're beginning to use the same fancy words over and over again. The subject you're trying to persuade me is that your complex vocab is that it works towards your advantage. I don't see anyone who supports you yet! Masterus, you are offended too easily, and you think you are correct on every aspect, but you are not.</p>
<p>Hindrance Twice, and before in the post "Why would i have a neccesity to cry?" Why would I have the need to cry? Same thing. Examine it carefully. What am I tring to prove? I'm not trying to prove anything but show the fact that I'm domineering over my Courses. What aspect? I'm not trying to prove anything</p>
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<p>"Without being too wordy", eh? Go look and back at the post I quoted you before and look who's talking. </p>
<p>Using complicated words is not necessarily an indication that someone is excelling in their courses. Why would you want to prove that to me, or anyone who has replied in this thread? Take your honors courses and vocabulary, for you seem to think that they alone will represent how superior you are to everyone else.</p>
<p>Masterus, reading your posts is a good way to improve critical reading on SAT.
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? I'm not trying to prove anything but show the fact that I'm domineering over my Courses.
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Alright, Cool.You are an exemplar of a Person who is domineering over His Courses. I began crying when I look at Your Courses. Have you tried applying to Guiness' book of records?
Why, for the goodness' sake would you be aiming to show somebody that you have a rigorous schedule for purposes, other than just to brag? I have seen your posts in "Final grades," you're trying to prove to yourself that you have best schedule, but that shouldn't be your goal. Your goal should be enjoyment of your courses!</p>
<p>Stop assuming. Where in my thread have I mentioned these atrocious assumptions. All I said is my riorous choise of classes are a desideratum. For an essay, which sounds better; Therefore or Then? and Which proves more detail? Would you rather use 1 or 3 excellent word or use 4 or 5 words to explain generally?</p>
<p>I think you didn't read it well. If you read the argument's points, you'd be more open-minded. I wasn't even bragging. Just because my courses are harder than someone elses and I mention it, I'm bragging? That's a horrible way to look at things. Did I ever say my courses are better than yours?</p>
<p>"Therefore" can sound better than "then". It is good to use vocabulary in your work, but not in excess. You assume too much. Don't think that I should go "learning some new words" just because I don't use words the way you do. </p>
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<p>Oh yes, very nice. One day the little fish in the small pond will meet the ocean.</p>
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Stop assuming. Where in my thread have I mentioned these atrocious assumptions. All I said is my riorous choise of classes are a desideratum.
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I hope this is how you have it, but that way, I wouldn't be worrying about Orchestra instead of academic course. And your posts, whether it's truth or not are not showing your, hmm, desideratum.
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Ehh, oops, I thought "therefore" and "then" are different words. You can look them up in a dictionary. In essay you want to have great ideas. If you have great ideas then nobody cares about dictionary. However, if you have extensive dictionary but bad ideas then you will sound like someone who's trying to mask his weakness under misunderstanding. Trust me, noone will say, - God, that kid uses words which even we are not aware of!, - this is not how it's done in the world. Try concentrating on your spelling also.</p>
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I think you didn't read it well. If you read the argument's points, you'd be more open-minded. I wasn't even bragging. Just because my courses are harder than someone elses and I mention it, I'm bragging? That's a horrible way to look at things. Did I ever say my courses are better than yours?
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<p>And who, may I ask, is that "someone else" you mention? You tell others to "stop assuming things" and yet you subconsiously are assuming things also. It's your high n' mighty and overly aggressive attitude that is your weakness.</p>
<p>Unlike you, my teachers taught me another way of writing essays. From the social studies portion of my classes I learn that you aren't writing as well. The teacher was a language arts teacher which is why she graded the hardest in our entire school. We learned to use primary documents to explain in our essays. Explaining is the most important aspect of an essay in my perspective.</p>
<p>The fish ricochet on the surface of the ocean. Therefore, excaping heavy predatory species. Many predators stay away from the surface ,but some like the dolphin enjoy caprioles or in their perspective, dancing on the ocean's surface. Their skin exhibit a shiny ,but luminous sight. They are easily constituted with human's sights.</p>
<p>What makes an idea great? Noone can answer that because there is no right or wrong answer. Great ideas still have to be explained thoroughly. Better words help you explain better most of the time.</p>
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No problem! At least people (well, generally) understand (or, at least tend to) what I am saying.
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The teacher was a language arts teacher which is why she graded the hardest in our entire school.
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How small do we all look in shade of your superiority, the scholar of the hardest teacher!
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May I be so brave as to beg your pardon and ask what in the world is 'primary document?'
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The fish ricochet on the surface of the ocean. Therefore, excaping heavy predatory species. Many predators stay away from the surface ,but some like the dolphin enjoy caprioles or in their perspective, dancing on the ocean's surface. Their skin exhibit a shiny ,but luminous sight. They are easily constituted with human's sights.
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Wov. That was awesome. You have to put space after comma, not before.</p>
<p>PS. Don't worry. It's a part of growing process.</p>
<p>Oh yes, now you're assuming you're better than me. You've said it, it's all in the open! Do you seriously think that everything your school does is better than anyone else's? You have no idea who I am, what I do, what classes I take. Let's see how your extraordinary writing skills work in the real world.</p>
<p>BEHOLD! Let's all bow down to your highness, King Masterus, whose irresistable vocabulary charms our tainted souls, whose teacher's ways of writing are far more admirable than anyone's in the world, better than ALL of us (who are in high school!) GASP! </p>
<p>Seriously, kid, this is how you think in your little world. Have a nice life!</p>
<p>No your assuming. I didn't say my school was better. I said we learned in many different fashions as to how to write. A primary document is a document written by someone when a certain event occured. The doument was created during the time period you were writing about. A secondary source is a document written by a historian afterwards the event already occured. It's how college students write in college for history and such. There you go assuming I'm better than you, you bemuse me.</p>
<p>Whole discussion should be posted to bash.org.
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Good job.
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Damn, I had that feeling that you were in grad. school, already passing college and high school, trying to make amusement from us.</p>