Grade My Essay: Do we expect too much from people of power?

<p>Here it is:</p>

<pre><code> "A person is a person," no matter what position of power he or she is in. Even though our celebrities and business tycoons and politicians are, well, THEM, they ARE only humans. This is why we musn't require from them more than we expect from ourselves.
My principal always says that to solve our [the students'] problems, we must look for solutions instead of complaining about the administation that has the power to fix it- "Only when you have found a satisfactory solution and suggested it myself are you in the position to expect from me." This same concept can be taken from the school setting and applied to any similar situation. Indeed, the only reason a mayor or governor is trying to avoid addressing a problem is that they don't have a solution. A community may have chosen a representative or leader to make major decisions and keep order, but this does not mean that pedestrian members of the society are no longer responsible for its problems and welfare.
Celebrities have long been major influences to the public. However, just because someone is famous, it doesn't mean they will never make mistakes. As Christina Perri would put it, they're "only human." A perfect example of this is Miley Cyrus. Only a teen when she started starring in a hit Disney Channel show, Miley was immortalized and idolized by millions of kids and teens. Parents across the United States were urging their kids to listen to her teach-me-a-lesson songs like 'Nobody's Perfect' and 'Who Said.' Then, Miley made a fairly pedestrian mistake that wouldn't incite a second glance on anyone else, and suddenly, the public was calling foul and turning away. Even though Miley Cyrus is a prominent figure in the media and seen by many eyes, we should not expect more from her than we do any other peson- "Nobody's Perfect," after all.
Even the amazing people who majorly advanced the understanding and sciences of humankind are not excluded from this rule. Marie "Madame" Curie, for instance, is arguably one of the most important and influential women scientists in history. Even though Madame made many crucial contributions to radioactivity and chemistry, recieving two Nobel prizes for her work along the way, she wasn't perfect. In fact, misconduct in her personal life led the "right wing" of the media to berate her, and even go as far as labeling her a jewess. Marie Curie was incredible, but like every other person in the world, she was flawed.
One may believe that the public is right to expect exceedingly from the people that hold power or influence, but when they examine my principal's words, Miley Cyrus, and Marie Curie, it is found that it's truly wrong to demand a show of flawlessness from the great people of our world.
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<p>Hey guys… Will someone grade this? It’s an SAT essay if that’s not clear.</p>

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