Grade my essay please :p

<p>^Where did you get that idea? You’re supposed to “develop your point of view, present your ideas logically and clearly, and use language precisely.” If you want to say that there’s a gray region, from the instructions alone, you are allowed to go for it. As long as your critical thinking ability shows, you’re fine. If you read the sample 6/6 essay, “Is perfection a vice or virtue?” in the Blue Book, you’d understand that CB too thinks talking about both sides is fine.</p>