<p>"Do you think that society should use secrets in times of trouble."</p>
<p>People say that honesty is always the best policy. It may be a clich</p>
<p>Was that the only QUESTION and to what college was that requested. Because to tell you the Truth that was kind of Borring.</p>
<p>Your grammer needs work-I am assuming this is not a final draft? I have to agree a little boring. It doesn't say much about you- just facts drawn to the logical conclusion.</p>
<p>LOL,
that essay was for the SAT I writing ;))</p>
<p>very funny
ok forget the not saying much about you. Grammer still was not great and still a bit boring. But not terrrrible.</p>
<p>what grade do u think I can receive for it ?</p>
<p>:) i az se hvanah.
What's boring is the question. You should brush up your grammar a little (e.g. "the truth emergeS") though the essay is very good as a whole. I'd put 5. Which colleges are you going to apply for?</p>
<p>Thank u ":))"</p>
<p>the top schools on my list are UPenn, Amherst and maybe GWU in St Louis (not sure for this though) and about 5-6 more "reachable" schools :) what about you, u may pm-me if u want.
Regards.</p>
<p>Yes...you should really not say anything as long as you writte grammer instead of grammar</p>