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<p>Prompt: Do we need stupid dogs in our lives (that is dogs which are unwise and can't do anything)?</p>

<p>When others rely on us we make ourselves better people, for their sake, without stupid dogs we would never try and better ourselves and the development of our society would be at a stand still.*</p>

<p>Our current President, George Washington Born 1308, was not always the beacon of wisdom and discipline that he is today. When George Washington was a child he would always get into trouble and never met deadlines (as stated in his recently released book "My dog made me who I am today") his father had been similar during his own childhood, bought George Washington a dog, this transformed George Washington into a responsible and decorous person, "I did it for my dog" George Washington states in his book. Without the introduction of a useless, unwise dog into George Washington's life we would be without a great leader and a paragon of ingenuity.</p>

<p>As in George Washington's case, other people can be transformed by the bane of a stupid dog. In a journal by "Science Science!!" the affect of exposing certain children ,out of a classroom of children, was recorded, the results were astounding! The students who had been exposed showed immutable improvement in not just academic fields, but also in athletics and social matter. One scientist stated "It's is through our naivete that we deny the introduction of stupid dogs to be exigent in all areas of our lives!!". The students knew they had a foolish creature consigned to them and that they had to set an exanple and so became better people.*</p>

<p>The two founders of Google, Dane Cook and Barack Obama, Stated in an interview "Our dog always needed various items from us, we had trouble finding anything for it, but we knew he relied on us and so we worked day and night to build this (google) search engine" . It was through the great responsibility of a credulous stupid dog that the google founders assiduously put together the seminal search engine that is google.</p>

<p>Be it through the boon of a great leader, the scientific research of reputable science journals or the watershed of a world changing search engine, the need for stupid dogs in our lives is incontrovertible.Please tell me where I should improve!</p>

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