Grade my essay

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Hello, I would really appreciate if anyone would take 2 minutes to grade my essay, and if you are taking the SAT too then I’ll give my feedback on yours too :slight_smile:
The topic: is disagreement necessary to progress?

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Nice essay!
Your essay is well developed, it includes a well stated thesis, 3 illustrated examples and a conclusion. My advice is that you

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try to give a personal example that is your example. Like use two of the examples that you have included and give your personal example.
It’s not mandatory but I’ve heard that is pretty beneficial to give your opinion.
And by the way I think your essay will get a 10 or a 11. If you include your opinion ( personal example )I guess you will get a solid 11.