Hello, here is my final essay before the November 7 SAT. If really hope for instructions on how to perfect it and what can I add or remove to make my essay better. Thanks
Hello, here is my final essay before the November 7 SAT. If really hope for instructions on how to perfect it and what can I add or remove to make my essay better. Thanks
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