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<p>It's about 5 years of High School I am only in 9th grade</p>

<p>5 Years of High School</p>

<p>5 years of High School, what do I think well High School has been pretty boring so far. I say most people will disagree with having High School for 5 years, but others would like it. High School is just preparing you for the real world. But it also means you have to wait another year to go to college.</p>

<pre><code> If we have 5 years of High School we can get more credits, take classes you wanted to take before but never got the chance to take it since their was to many kids in the class, also we could get more electives and take higher classes that we didn't take before.. The bad thing about having 5 years of High School is our attendance will go down since we might not want to go some days because we have all of our credits and don't really need anymore for college, also we are 18 if we get into a fight on school campus we can get is serious trouble with the law and possibly go to jail.

I like the idea because we get to learn more, and can go to the college of my dreams. If I had a chance of taking High School again I would take it because I want to get more credits and take classes I wanted to take. I would be preparing for the future and getting my credits and learning things that nobody else probably knew. High School is teaching us how to buy things in a grocery store or whats in our body, what our world use to be like, and how we can communicate with others. It's like having our 7th hour but a whole year.
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<p>I have asked around and kids say they don't like the idea because they have to learn more, they would already know everything by then, and they just don't like coming to school. But they don't know what they can get with it, I tell them 5 years of High School can give you ore credits and a better chance of getting in to college. I think of what they were thinking, “Maybe its a good idea.” or “Nah still a terrible idea.” </p>

<p>High School would be better with 5 years I would like to have it so my dreams of ever getting my dream job will come true and I could have that perfect life I have imagined y whole entire life.</p>

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<p>To be quite honest, I thought that your sentence structure was quite poor. I don’t know about a grade, but your essay contained several fragments, or incomplete sentences. I know you said you were in 9th grade and so my best suggestion for you is to stop worrying about the ACT essay and focus on your school curriculum. I feel your school’s English class would teach you the fundamentals to receive a solid writing score grade. Lastly, I would reccomend not writing the way you think. I noticed you said “nah” (after a poorly integrated quotation in many ways–from the period to the capitalization) and I would suggest straying away from phrasing such as this. To sum up, quit focusing on your ACT scores and listen to what your teacher has to say about grammar and paragraph structure, even if that means going after school for help. Best of luck!</p>