<p>"When you reach an obstacle, turn it into an opportunity. You have the choice. You can overcome and be a winner, or you can allow it to overcome you, and be a loser. The choice is yours and yours alone. Refuse to throw in the towel. Go that extra mile that failure refuses to travel. It is far better to be exhausted from success than to be rested from the failure."
-Mary Kay Ash</p>
<p>Assignment: What is your view of the idea that every obstacle can be turned into an opportunity. Plan and write an...blah blah(same thing every essay)</p>
<p>MY ESSAY:</p>
<pre><code> >>> Every obstacle can be turned into an opportunity through perseverance and dedication. Human nature is associated with the stubbornness to succeed. For example, Harriet Tubman did not let any racial barriers overthrow her. Also, during the colonial period the colonists did not allow themselves to be dominated by the British. Another example is of Andrew Carnegie who headed the Carnegie Steel Industry in the nineteenth century.
>>> Harriet Tubman, a famous African American women who was enslaved as a part of the terror reign of the slavery period did not allow herself to be forced to work in a cotton field all her life. She turned the obstacles into a gateway. Tubman befriended many Caucasians as she worked in the cotton fields. These Caucasians and black freeman helped her escape through the underground railroad. Not only did she grant her own freedom, breaking a barrier, but she helped many African Americans also relinquish their doubts that they could not be free. Harriet Tubman is an example of a person who used an enormous obstacle to her advantage.
>>> Another example of turning an obstacle into an opportunity can be seen during the colonial period. The American colonists were tired of the British King's role in their personal society. Though the king held many powerful laws against them, such as legal charters, the colonists turned this around declaring that since they were the ones leading lives in America, while the king was hundreds of miles away, they should be able to dictate government for themselves, thus leading to the American Revolution. The American Revolution was a turning point in American history. This example demonstrates how the colonists used claims and laws the King of Britain used to keep power against him.
>>> Another example is the classic rags to riches story of Andrew Carnegie, who created the Carnegie Steel Industry. He began working in a small factory and worked his way up the social ladder despite social stigmas. He went from a poor city boy working in a factory to one of America's top billionaires during that time period. He did not allow himself to be discouraged by monetary values, but instead created his own opportunity.
>>> Throughout history, people have always managed to turn an obstacle into an opportunity. Harriet Tubman, the American colonists, and Andrew Carnegie are all examples of this changing of luck. Today, our society follows these examples to create a luxurious life for all Americans.
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<p>I wrote this in 25 minutes, wit abotu 1 minute and 30 seconds to spare. As I was typing it on here i found mistake but I didn't change them because on the actual test I wouldn't be able to. So PLEASE help me out a bit. Grade me on the actual scale of 1-12. or 1-6 if u grade on a one person scale. AND ADVICE ON HOW TO MAKE IT BETTER (do u think using three history examples makes them all seem the same? Wats another example I can use? THANK YOU ALL VERY MUCH.</p>