Graduates (not '09) Read my Short EC Essay?

<p>Hey, i was wondering if anyone wanted to read and CRITIQUE my short (150 words) EC essay for the common app. The prompt is just to describe one EC in 150 words.</p>

<p>Please only respond if you are in college/parent and NOT a member of the high school class of 2009 for privacy reasons. I would PM it to you, along with a short list of my ECs so you could see how it would look to an adcom. Any help is greatly appreciated!</p>

<p>I’ll read it. PM me.</p>

<p>Sure. Feel free to send it.=]</p>

<p>PM me, i’ll help you edit.</p>