grammar of my essay

<p>does anyone want to look over my essay thus far? I think I have the tenses wrong. I start off in present tense, then switch to past tense. The reason for the switch is because I start off talking about a performance, then I switch the tense because I begin reflecting on it and how it had an impact on me. Is this okay?</p>

<p>send it ill look at it.</p>

<p>PM has been sent, RickJ.</p>

<p>Anyone else willing to look over my tenses?</p>