Grammar problems

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<li>Observation of diverse animal species SHOW THAT that MOST SUCCESSFUL in the struggle for survival are THOSE WHICH are most ADAPTABLE TO changes in their world.</li>
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<p>Why is is MOST SUCCESSFUL?</p>

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<li>Far AWAY FROM having been a diehard conservative, HOOVER WAS, some scholars NOW COTENT, the leading progressive OF HIS DAY.</li>
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<p>Is AWAY FROM a diction error? </p>

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<li>ALERTED BY the nervousness and evasiveness of the witness, the jurors were quick TO PERCEIVE that his statements were INCONSISTENT TO (C) THOSE (D) he had made earlier.</li>
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<p>It should be inconsistent WITH right? Any reasoning behind this?</p>

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<li>The revolt against Victorianism was perhaps even more marked in poetry than (EITHER FICTION OR DRAMA)</li>
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<p>I said "either fiction or in drama", but the answer is "in either fiction or drama". Explanations? Thanks for the help.</p>

<p>Btw I have been stuck in the 670-690 range for the last 3 practice tests. Any ways I can improve this into at least the mid 700s? Its getting frustrating..</p>

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<li><p>Parallelism </p></li>
<li><p>Idiomatic</p></li>
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<li>Idiomatic . Far away from . Think about it. </li>
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<p>I am far from my goal. I am far away from my goal. Which sounds correct.</p>

<p>I think for 1, it should be something like “the most successful” or the ones that are most successful or something.</p>

<p>To OP:</p>

<p>What did you think the answer was suppose to be?</p>

<p>1.) observation is singular so it’s “SHOWS” not show(check this one again?)
3.) inconsistent with (idiom)</p>

<p>For the last one, if you say “either fiction or in drama”, you have “in” in front of drama, but not in front of “fiction”.
So, to make it parallel, you make it “in either fiction or drama”
if “in” is in front of “either”, then the parallelism can be maintained for the two nouns we’re talking about—fiction and drama.</p>

<p>Wait my bad number 1’s error is SHOW THAT. Not MOST SUCCESSFUL.</p>

<p>Nice catch ruvuitton.</p>