<p>"Photographs capture my cherished moments with the people I love."</p>
<p>OR</p>
<p>"Photographs capture the cherished moments with the people I love."</p>
<p>?????</p>
<p>Any suggestions that have the same desired effect? I'm not sure how to word that sentance.</p>
<p>Thaaaaank you!</p>
<p>Neither; both sound forced.</p>
<p>Yeah....that's why I asked for suggestions on improvements.</p>
<p>Thanks.</p>
<p>Eliminate both. It should read "Photographs capture cherished moments with the people I love."</p>
<p>Former English major.</p>
<p>PERFECT.</p>
<p>Thank you SO much, that is EXACTLY what I was trying to get across. </p>
<p>I am forever indebted to you!</p>
<p>My pleasure. For future reference, always look to eliminate any words that are unnecessary. You would be amazed at how many extraneous words people throw into sentences which end up diluting the point they are trying to convey.</p>