Grill/roast(or just read) my Common App Essay (prompt 1)

I am at 647 words (so cutting it really close). I feel like I have a decent essay but it would help to get others’ opinions… Please be honest and don’t hold back.

I’d be happy to have a look for you if you Pm me with it (I’m also applying this year though so that’s if you don’t mind)

You can pm me yours if you will critique mine! :slight_smile:

PM me. Fair warning though – I’m a pretty ruthless editor

bump because id like more reviews

I’d be happy to edit!