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College Essays
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<p>i have three ideas to start my essay, but i need help developing them…</p>

<li><p>i was going to talk about my screen name that i made when i was 7 and how i still have it… and then i was thinking about discussing my identity in the real world vs. the cyber world?</p></li>
<li><p>when my mom was teaching me manners in preschool, i always refused to say “please” and instead always mumbled “pleap.” maybe go on to talk about stubbornness, listening to parents, how they know best, etc, etc. along with this theme, my parents forced me to take sailing when i was 6 and i hated it but they made me stick with it and now it’s my favorite thing ever (as you can see from my user name) </p></li>
<li><p>how i like diseases (not having them) although i’ve had some experience with them… for example, i got shingles when i was only 12. and then i had another weird condition in january. it’s quirky, but i don’t know what deeper meaning this would have haha.</p></li>
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<p>and let me know what idea you like best.</p>

<p>thanks a lot!</p>

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<h1>1 would probably tell the most about you, if you execute it well. Nice idea too.</h1>

<h1>3 seems more like something you would write about if you were trying to explain a career interest.</h1>

<p>Not really sure about #2. I think the overall story might be a little cliched but some colleges might like it.</p>

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<h1>1: You'll be one of the few writing about something that quirky</h1>

<h1>2: Sounds cute, but it's too normal =D</h1>

<h1>3: Hmmm...I don't know.</h1>

<p>If I were you, I'd go for #1. But then that one might be hard to do...?</p>