Hello everyone! I just finished a revamp of my essay from ED because it was, as the title may suggest, somewhat depressing and kinda woe-is-me. I still don’t know how well I’ve written it now so I’m just wondering if anyone could give me a second opinion on it via PM? Thanks!!
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Happy to take a look,
I was having the same issue and dont know here to start. I worked with Brian from Gurufi for my essay edits and have been very happy with the results. I believe he will be able to help you out too! You can discuss with him and he will help you to solidify your thoughts and you will love the outcome.
I’ve been proofreading essays for free here on CC. I’m well qualified on the topic of writing, and I’m a very discerning reader.
I enjoy reading and editing a good essay, written by anyone.
My only motive is to help students.
I’d like to be a resource for people who are smart and conscientious, but who maybe haven’t had every material advantage or social endorsement.
I’m a big fan of students who want to improve whatever they think needs improving. Not so much a fan of essays that are poorly written, not well-edited, and yet are chasing some Ivy ego aspiration. If that’s you and you haven’t even spell-checked–please don’t send that to me.
That said, I will proofread anyone else’s essay.