<p>Ivyleaguechamp, you may not think that making a good float is a big deal or even interesting, but it was very important to me. It was an experience that was really personal to me and that meant a lot. Now, I don't know what grammar mistakes you are talking about, my English teacher certainly didn't point them out if they are there. If they are I would really appreciate you letting me know what they are instead of just criticizing my essay topic, because that's not going to change. So, instead of trying to put down my interests, help me to make my essay better by some constructive criticism. I'm very open to that.</p>