Harry Potter and the Unintellectual but risky essay

<p>Thanks for your responses! You're right, I shouldn't stress out. Gianievve, I understand your point on the gymnastics, but my short answer on the common app. is already about that. I think it would be a little redundant to do another essay on it. I think I'll just stick with my main essay. I don't think the things ivyleaguechamp pointed out necessarily have to be changed. I like the wording there, even though it is a bit different. Thanks again!</p>