<p>I just wrote a very rough draft of an essay for transfer which I loved and was extremely proud of, I showed it to my mother and she hated it. Now I'm wondering whether it's that bad.</p>
<p>Would someone be willing to harshly critique my essay? It's more of the "additional information" essay of why I had less than stellar high school grades (it's a transfer application). </p>
<p>If asked, I'll review your essay in return.</p>
<p>I'll definitely take a look at it.
I don't need an essay reviewed but I do give specific and sometimes harsh (at least from my perspective) feedback.</p>
<p>sure, pm me.
I'd like critique on mine also.</p>
<p>Yea pm me too, I don't need any critique on mine yet, but when I do, I'll let you know.</p>
<p>i'll trade with you. pm me.</p>
<p>Feel free to send me your essay.</p>
<p>I don't have an essay up for critique. But, I'd be willing to critique yours.</p>
<p>Thanks, I'm in the process of PMing everyone just as soon as I find my USB card.</p>
<p>Sent.
Thanks for everyones' help.</p>
<p>I will look if you want.</p>