<p>Hey guys,</p>
<p>I finished writing my essay for the supplement and would really appreciate some critiques.</p>
<p>I was wondering if any of you wonderfully insightful people would be willing to give me your opinion on my essay, and possibly some advice on how to make it better.</p>
<p>Thanks in advanced.</p>
<p>i'll read it! just pm it to me or send it to <a href="mailto:angelmonicaw@yahoo.com">angelmonicaw@yahoo.com</a></p>
<p>Yeah i'm available too.</p>
<p>I'll read it, pm me.</p>
<p>I'll read it; I sent my app in a month ago</p>
<p>I'll give it a read</p>
<p>I'll help - I sent in my app today (does a happy dance)</p>
<p>ill read it. pm me!</p>
<p>yeah i'll have a look PM me~</p>
<p>PM me and I'll read it =)</p>
<p>I'll take a look - if you promise to look at mine also! Shoot me a PM and i'll give you mine first :)</p>
<p>(2320 SAT, so hopefully i'm a strong candidate)</p>
<p>I'll read it. PM me.</p>
<p>i'll read it too. pm it over</p>
<p>looks like you have a lot of responses, but pm me too if you don't mind.</p>
<p>Moi aussi. I can take a look.</p>
<p>Just PM me!</p>
<p>I'd like to take a look as well.
Please don't hesitate to send it my way.</p>