<p>Hi,
Would anyone be willing to help me edit my Supplement essay for Harvard.
I would really appreciate some feedback and criticism on what I need to fix. Thank you in advance :)</p>
<p>Dare to send your essays to me again? :-)</p>
<p>Sorry, I must admit that I am very harsh. But at the end, if any of you kids makes to your dream school, that it serves its purpose.</p>
<p>Oh yea no problem :)</p>
<p>I will give you feedback.</p>
<p>I will read it if you PM me. I am a freshman at Duke</p>