<p>The real question is in the final paragraph, the other paragraphs are to provide background information. </p>
<p>As many other dedicated and intelligent students, my dream is to go to Harvard. However, this is one small obstacle that is in my way: rejection. Just like 40,000 other, probably well-qualified applicants, I heard the bad news on Ivy Day and was crushed by the response. </p>
<p>I asked myself every night for the past night questions like, What happened? and Where did I go wrong in my application? Honestly, I dont know. I dont know what more I could have done to get into Harvard. I roughly had a 3.82 GPA which included plenty of rigorous and Advanced Placement courses, involved in many different clubs and activities holding various positions such as the school newspaper, mock trial team, varsity swim team, quiz bowl, student council, and Spanish club. I was also a peer-tutor for international students (from South Korea and China) and struggling students in the areas of Math, Science, and English. I totally immersed myself in my community making sure that I accomplished at least 85+ hours of service each year helping those in need through various drives and volunteering at the local senior center. I even set up different scholarships and opportunities within my school for those families who are underprivileged and cannot afford to attend a private high school. In the summer, I work three jobs, five days a week, and have been promoted each year due to my work ethic. Through my years in high school, my good attitude and morals have earned me the utmost respect from all my teachers.</p>
<p>Now, Im not trying to brag, but I would say that my resume was impressive. I go to a small, private, Catholic high school in Massachusetts that basically only has one spot for an Ivy League school. While its no Exeter or Andover Academy, it is very rigorous and distinguished. Everyone who reviewed it for me said the same thing. Even Harvard loved it. I got a phone call a few weeks after I applied and told me that they wanted an alumni to meet me at the Harvard Coop (the bookstore across the street) for an interview. I was ecstatic, my friends and family felt the same way. The interview went very well, and he was very impressed with what I had to offer. That same day I took a tour of the school and met with the financial aid office where we learned about the 10% plan. Because my family doesnt make a substantial amount of money, this financial plan was like music to my parents ears, and I knew that I wouldnt have to burden them with an outrageous bill at the end of four years. We then met with a woman at the admissions office in Radcliffe yard who encouraged me to participate in the overnight stay program. I fell in love with the school as soon as I stepped foot in the yard. The opportunities, students, courses, resources (and even the food!), are all remarkable. </p>
<p>So, what could go wrong, right? Well, everything went wrong. I guess I dreamt too big and lost my head. I got the rejection letter and didnt know what to do. I was lost. There were only a few options left, but I wasnt too crazy about them. I narrowed my decision down to Boston University and Emmanuel College in Boston. At first choice, you would have to pick BU, but I barely received any financial aid and it would be almost impossible for my parents to financially support me. I received a full-boat to Emmanuel which made it an automatic option. While my physical being is going to be at one of these two places this fall, my heart is in the yard and will do anything to transfer. </p>
<p>Basically, I was wondering if anyone had any advice or guidance for me (or any other aspiring potential Harvard transfer student) on how to increase my chances of acceptance. I know the chances are in the 1%-2.5% range depending on the year, but I dont want to hear that. Im trying to keep my positive attitude and dedicated work ethic. Im competing with the best in the world for only a few spots, many of whom have outstanding resumes. I need something that can help me stand out to my admissions councilor at Harvard and make them say, This kid belongs here. However, will Harvard overlook my application completely if I go to a particular school for financial reasons? I know that I can do the work and have academic success, but we cant afford it. Thank you for reading this and thank you for your time.</p>