Decision Rejected
Objective:
SAT I (breakdown): First time 1380 Second time 1420 Third time 1500 (no super score)
ACT (breakdown): First time 25 Second time 29 Third time 32 (didn’t submit) lol took the sat and act three time in a row within 3 month
SAT II: Chinese 800 Math II 750
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 91%/100% (have to work 6-7 hr a day)
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): Don’t know… probably the top 15%
AP (place score in parenthesis): AP Microeconomics 5. AP Macroeconomics 5, AP Calculus AB 5 ( All self studied)
IB (place score in parenthesis): N/A
Senior Year Course Load: AP English literature, AP Psychology, AP Human Geography, AP Computer Science, AP Econ, AP Physics, Business Leadership.
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.):
-ISSF International Student Science Fair
-Small Awards
Subjective:
Extracurriculars (place leadership in parenthesis):
-President and Founder of school’s Guitar Club (2 yrs)
-Vice President of Investment Club (1 yr)
-Teacher Assist for kid with special need (1 yrs)
-Web Game Script Business ( 2 yrs) wrote a script for a web game when I was in middle school, and sold out 500+ copies on internet at a price of 7.99 each.
-Toy Business (1 yrs) Import toys from China, and supply it to North America toy shops. I promote my business through cold mailing and it went pretty well. I make about 2000$/month for a year, but I stopped due to the change in policy.
-Hair Extension Business (1/2 yr) Import hair extension clips from China, and sell them to local Hair Salon. Just like how I run the toy business, cold mailing, cold calling, and I also created a website for it www.tobecomehairgoal.com
Didn’t do well on this one make about 600$/month, but since I do a drop shopping so no initial investment. Shut down now because too much opportunity cost, and as a high school boy I have no interest in Hair extensions.
-Online Tutoring Company( 1/2 yr + on going)CEO and founder of an online tutoring startup, so far pretty well, we have 33 employees, and over 60 clients coming from 6 different countries. I start with no initial investment, and we currently have a revenue of 10000$/month, still expending in a daily basis. Sorry to make this sounds like an advertisement, but I do want to take this opportunity and promote it, as we are always seeking for talent people to join our team. If you are interested in tutoring other online, feel free to email me or dm me for more detail (wjy421421@gmail.com). We are a legally registered company at Canada Ontario. I actually just made partnership with another tutoring startup from Stanford university. But that was a week ago, which was 2 days before the result comes out. !!!
YOU DON’T NEED TO HAVE A COMPANY TO GET INTO STANFORD, BECAUSE I HAVE ONE, AND I DIDN"T GET IN LMAO !
Job/Work Experience:
Internship at a Chinese Law Firm, responsible for social media and online advertisement (2 month)
Volunteer/Community service:
150 hr on Church, School Event, and Chinese School.
Summer Activities:
Essays (rating 1-10, details):
Common App (7/10) it’s personal, but I don’t think I write it well, because I start writing it one day before the deadline lol) Supplement (6/10) I was ****. Literally did the supplements 15 minutes before the deadline.
PLEASE FINISH YOUR ESSAY AHEAD AND EDIT IT !!! I PAID MY LESSON!!
Recommendations (rating 1-10, details):
Teacher Rec #1: Leadership teacher Didn’t saw it, but should be fine, as I’m close to her.
Teacher Rec #2: Math Teacher She is nice but I don’t know her really well as I’m a new student to the high school.
Counselor Rec: Didn’t saw it But I think is really good, I talk about my businesses with my counselor a lot.
Additional Rec: N/A
Interview: 70 min great talk with a lady. I think she was impressed by my businesses
Other
Applied for Financial Aid?: Yes
Intended Major:Economics
State (if domestic applicant): Ontario
Country (if international applicant): Canada
School Type: Public
Ethnicity:Asian Chinese ( I’m proud of my race)
Gender:Male
Income Bracket: 20k Low income
Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): First Generation College.
Reflection
Strengths: … Unique EC?
Weaknesses: Grades
Why you think you were accepted/waitlisted/rejected: I was rejected because I didn’t really spend time on my essay. Also, I think they don’t believe my ECs> …
Where else were you accepted/waitlisted/rejected: Harvard: Rejected, Princeton: Rejected, Yale Rejected, Upenn Waitlisted, Columbia Rejected, Cornell Rejected, Dartmouth rejected.
U of Toronto Accepted, University of Waterloo Accepted
General Comments:
Small suggestion: don’t leave your essay till the deadline
Good luck on applications !!!