Decision: Accepted
Objective:
SAT I (breakdown): N/A
ACT (breakdown): 32 Composite (36 English, 35 Reading, 27 Math, (yikes), 31 Science, 8 Writing (yikes))
SAT II: US History (750) Biology Ecological (730)
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 4.0
Weighted GPA: 4.53
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): 2/210
AP (place score in parenthesis): US History (5) Psychology (5) English Literature & Composition (4) Biology (3) English Language & Composition (3)
IB (place score in parenthesis): N/A
Senior Year Course Load: AP Calculus, AP Spanish, AP Environmental Science, AP US Government and Politics, AP Macroeconomics, Honors British Literature
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): Not really any major awards. I put UCLA Council of African American Parents Academic Excellence Award, National Society of High School Scholars Academic Award Ceremony in Washington, DC, AP Scholar with Distinction, Vice President/Member of National Honor Society, Deanās High Honor List. Like I said, no real awards. However, I explained in essays the reasons why.
Subjective:
Extracurriculars (place leadership in parenthesis): Lead Counselor/ International āThe Pulse on Tourā (Lead assistant to worldās top choreographers. In other words, a high leadership position), Student Body President of CAVA (President), āChicks That Dig Litā book club (Founder), WNBA Sparkās Dance Team (Captain), Marketing intern at a photography company, Girls pop group (Founding member), Team World Vision marathon to bring clean water to kids in Africa
Job/Work Experience: International TV Show guest star/ Disney Channel
Volunteer/Community service: 700 hoursā¦ too many to name
Summer Activities: Harvard SSP '16, touring the country for dance, volunteering, camp, reading, traveling, etc.
Essays (rating 1-10, details):
Common App: 10 I worked for monnnnths on just this one essay and redid it probably 200 times. Iād finish it, leave for a day, come back and realize I hated it, and completly reinvent it. My topic was about my unorthodox life growing up in Hollywood being a professional dancer and singer and actress and, well, everything LOL. I showed my interesting schooling (Iām an online high school student) which was a result of my busy career schedule, and emphasized how any academic accomplishments I have is because Iām so passionate about learning and fought for my education in the world of Hollywood that doesnāt value it and also through the challenges of being first gen.
Supplemental: 11 This essay was my soul. The topic was my hair (I have very big, curly hair that is kind of my defining characteristic haha), however I didnāt just talk about my hair, I used it as a mechanism to dive deeper into my life, my childhood, my race, my identity, etc. It was very introspective and protrayed such a real, raw view of me.
Recommendations (rating 1-10, details):
Teacher Rec #1 (rating 1-10, details): My Harvard chemistry professor from over the summer. I didnāt read it so have no clue, but she really liked me and I think it was a good addition to have a rec letter from a Harvard professor if nothing else
Teacher Rec #2 (rating 1-10, details): My AP Lang teacher, who was also my advisor when I was president of my school, wrote me such an amazing and glowing letter that emphasized literally everything I wanted Harvard to know (9)
Counselor Rec (rating 1-10, details): My counselor wrote me such an amazing letterā¦ I cried. She made it veryyy clear that I was the best student she has ever come in contact with etc. etc. (11)
Additional Rec (if any) (rating 1-10, details): Great!! From someone who was involved with overseeing one of my volunteer activities, but who knew me really well, and wrote the most amazing things. I cried again. (10)
Interview (if any) (rating 1-10, details): A M A Z I N G. I absolutely loved my interviewer, and she loved me. We had such an awesome talk and she thought I had so much potential and was really amazed by the fact that I have done so good academically when I havenāt been in an intellectually-focused environemnt at all. She even met with my parents the other day and they talked for 3 hours. She is so great and we plan to stay in contact
Other:
Applied for Financial Aid?: Yes
Intended Major: Common app actually didnāt ask for major, which I thought was interesting, but I put āHumanitiesā for the area of study
State (if domestic applicant): CA
Country (if international applicant): USA
School Type: Online
Ethnicity: African American
Gender: Female
Income Bracket: Definitely applied for financial aidā¦
Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): first gen, black
Reflections: ā¦ I canāt believe this. I put my everything into my application and I did my absolute best at everything I did because I TRULY loved it. I told myself I was happy no matter what because I worked so hard and did my best and that now it was out of my hands. However, that didnāt keep me from stressingā¦ I stressed SO much. Looking back, though, thereās nothing I would change. I poured my heart into this and I think thatās the best anyone can do.
Strengths: My essays!! And also my really unique background and school life. Oh and definitely my interview, even though I know it supposedly doesnāt have much of an effect, I really do think that amazing report from her really helped.
Weaknesses: TEST SCORES! I thought I might get rejected based on the 32 alone. Not that itās low. But, ya know, this is Harvardā¦ a 32 IS low for them.
Why you think you were accepted/waitlisted/rejected: See strengths. Also, I just think they saw that not only will I benefit greatly from being at Harvard, but THEY will benefit from having me. In other words, I think they thought I had a lot to bring to the campus, and that I would be a great addition to their community. However, at the end of the day, I have no clue. Itās Harvard after all, who knows why I got accepted, Iām just happy I did!
Where else were you accepted/waitlisted/rejected: No where. Submitted a few apps already but still had like 10 left. Now Iām only going to do like 4 of those, the ones I actually care about. However, I do think I will be attending Harvard, no matter what.
General Comments (if any): AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH. I actually cannot believe today happened. Iāve been lurking on this site for a few years now and to be able to post my own post and say I was accepted?! CRAZY! Iām so incredibly thankful and blessed and hope that all of you who were deferred get in and that all of you who were rejected find a place that is so so so perfect for you, and congrats to those accepted!!! WE DID IT!