having a meltdown here!

<p>so im new at this.
can someone please "chance me"... because i'm getting really worried and starting to doubt myself!
here it is:</p>

<p>GPA: weighted 4.2135</p>

<p>6 AP classes (three this year), all others are Honors
5 on US History and Literature
4 on Calc I</p>

<p>SAT I- Best Scores
Math: 720
CR: 700
Writing: 800
1420/1600 or 2220/2400</p>

<p>SAT IIs
Literature: 740<br>
U.S. History: 710
sucks i know</p>

<p>Activities:
Modern & Ballet Dance (9 years)
Key Club ( public relations officer) - all 4 years
Student Council - all 4 years
French NHS- 2 years
National History Day Competition- 2 years (won 2nd place at districts)
Volunteer at Pearl S. Buck House
Part time job</p>

<p>Special Qualities: Bilingual (moved here form Ukraine at age 7 and am fluent in Russian). Where could I include this in my app???</p>

<p>Awards:
National Merit Semifinalist
AP Scholar
2nd place at Districts NHD
9th grade.. national junior honors society (include this or not???)</p>

<p>SHOULD I INCLUDE THESE.... newspaper (9,10), NJHS (9), track (9)</p>

<p>Essay: think this might possible make/break me. anyone willing to read it? its kind of an off-beat topic</p>

<p>My Schools: NYU (BE HONEST AS I REALLY WOULD LIKE TO GO HERE)
Boston University, USC, Columbia possible, Yale (possibly), Fordham</p>

<p>please and thank you!!!! :)</p>

<p>I'll read it if you want, email it to <a href="mailto:junkfoodattack@yahoo.com">junkfoodattack@yahoo.com</a> and leave your email, i can maybe correct it if you need help</p>