<p>two questions:
1. would you be able to read my essay or a short summary on it and judge whether the idea sounds ok (through PM because I don't feel comfortable posting it online)?
2. does anyone here have experience with prompt 3 (challenging a belief)?</p>
<p>I wrote my essay already and I do think it expresses who I <em>am,</em> but I'm worried if I addressed the topic well enough. I'm also scared to offend. I picked a personal topic, not related to politics or society or anything like that, but people can just be overly sensitive, or maybe I'm just being overly sensitive about all this I don't know lol</p>
<p>overall, I think I have all these doubts for nothing but I would really like for a few people to proofread my essay! I can't show it to my family because they either don't read/speak english well enough or they don't understand the college process well enough to judge if it's "acceptable."</p>
<p>but if you guys don't want to read it and can offer general prompt 3 advice, that would be great!</p>