Having troubles deciding which admissions essay to send! (Common App)

<p>I wrote two essays for the Common App, both centering around the same topic, but fairly different from each other. I'm not sure which one I should send! If anyone can read over both real quick (and maybe a few pointers would help :D) and help me choose, it would be great! I really don't want to rush you, but the January 1st deadline is drawing closer, so fast(er) responses would be nice >< Please post and I'll PM it to you! I know my essays may not be good enough to plagarize or copy off of, but I may be a little iffy on who I send them to, as I did take quite a while to write them ^^ Please don't feel offended :[ Thank you so much!</p>

<p>*centering on…sorry, darn idioms ><</p>

<p>you can PM them to me.
I’m a senior currently but I already wrote my common app essay and am working on my supplements. Could I PM you back my ND supplement short answers (3 150 word responses) for you read over them for content? (i.e. rating/10 and what I could do to improve them).</p>

<p>If you want, I could read them and see if I can give you any suggestions. I completed my Common App essay this morning and won’t be changing it, so I don’t have an incentive to steal another’s essay. Besides, that’s just plain dishonest. If not, that’s fine. I personally wouldn’t give my essays out to strangers on the internet either.</p>