<p>i just need an opinion on what my essay topic should be</p>
<p>i am choosing the significant experience and i was thinking about writing about my fathers cancer and how i came out through this ordeal</p>
<p>the turning pt that i would be writing about would be how i was awakened to the realities of cancer and how so many ppl have to endure it every day</p>
<p>u might want to include how that effected you personally, this is a personal essay
so i suggest maybe like, how this event has strengthened you and wat not
how it has changed you ,etc.
and ur idea is good too</p>
<p>you seem really uncertain of the former topic (cancer and how it has affected you). if you were to tackle it, however, i wouldn't advise you to write about how it has made you more conscious of your own health -- unless you can make such a cliche very personal.</p>
<p>as for the latter topic, it seems risky; how do you plan on executing it? by choosing one dream of yours and expanding upon it?</p>
<p>cancer:
i would talk about how it opened me to the realities of cancer .. how it educated me ...seeing my father endure it gave me a reality check that neone can have cancer .. and made me more concious of my own health and thus i began taking care of myself and i will talk about how during the summer i decided to work out like crzy so that my body would be more healthy and decided to watch wat i ate </p>
<p>for the second topic
i would write about a couple of diverse dreams that i have and want to complete during my life .. thus implying that i am a renaissance woman</p>