<p>Hi, i'm a thai student...I'm in my senior year now and will be applying to colleges in the US...anyways, I'm rather stuck on my main essay. From what I read on CC, it seems like students in the US write perfect and wonderful essays. I have no one to compare to because I'm studying in Thailand. Will anyone be willing to help me and read my essay? I really want to know how it compares to the standards of essays written by american students and also how I can improve it. Plus, I also want to know what adults think of my essay. I'd greatly appreciate your help and advice!
By the way, some universities i'm applying to are Lehigh, Washington U. in St Louis, and Columbia (my dream school).</p>
<p>PM your essay to me.</p>