<p>Hi.
Iam a international sophomore student from Mount holyoke and iam trying to transfer to Brandeis.
Can someone take a look at my draft ?? I'd like some constructive criticisms. :P</p>
<p>I’d love to read/revise your essay! I’m actually a sophomore at UMass trying to transfer to Brandeis too 
Small world, eh? You can email it to me at <a href=“mailto:jsetayes@student.umass.edu”>jsetayes@student.umass.edu</a></p>
<p>hey send me your essay too, at <a href="mailto:hoa.dang26@gmail.com">hoa.dang26@gmail.com</a>. I am thinking about transferring to Brandeis, too</p>
<p>if you still need revisers, email me at <a href="mailto:saga143@hotmail.com">saga143@hotmail.com</a> - also considering Brandeis!</p>