HELP!!! critique my essay!

<p>ok so i feel like i'm not that good of a writer and i'm just having a lot of problems..... i'm thinking about using this essay for yale and georgetown so it needs to be good!!! does any one want to read it? it's one of those "describe a unique quality/tell us something" kinds of prompts.... please?!</p>

<p>sure I'll read it</p>

<p>I'd be glad to read it. Just PM me.</p>

<p>PM me, I am in the same situation like you, I think we could help each other mutually. Thanks</p>

<p>I'll read it! Pm me!!</p>

<p>me too! PM me :)</p>

<p>PM it over and I'll critique it for you.</p>

<p>ill read it. might be able to offer some suggestions</p>

<p>Okay pm me</p>