<p>No i am not applying to Princeton. Nor am I the most brilliant of people. But I do need your help! I am posting in the Yale forum because I got little response to my exact post in the "college essay" forum :(. I was hoping that some one of esteemed stature could help me revise and comment on my application essay. I would like a strong proof reader and some one with excellent ideas that is not hesitant to tell me the truth (in a nice way of course). My topic is actually interesting I think you will enjoy it, it is the grammer, fluency, transitions, and some ideas that I need extra help with. And that is where you come in! I will PM anyone that is up for it. Please also let me know your academic resume and a little bit about yourself before we dive into this. I am sure you are all over and beyond the call of duty!</p>
<p>Thanks in Advance!!</p>