Help Critique my UC personal statements? (In progress)

College Essays
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<p>If anyone would be willing to read my essays I'd be really thankful!
Just post in this thread and I'll PM it to you! =]</p>

<p>If it helps with judgement, I'm aiming for UCI/UCSD/UCLA/UCB</p>

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<p>sure, pm it to me</p>

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<p>Pm it to me</p>

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<p>Pm me please</p>

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<p>I’ll read them.</p>

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<p>I will read them, just pm it to me</p>

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<p>Is anyone currently online that would be willing to critique my essay? =]</p>

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<p>Sure. PM me. I’m pretty busy, but I’ll look at it when I get bored :)</p>

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<p>LOL, ill read and critque it :smiley: btw im a senior too but already turned in my Apps</p>

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<p>PM me and I will!</p>

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<p>PM me and I will gladly</p>

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<p>I’ll read it and critique you!</p>

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<p>ill read it</p>

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<p>shoot me a pm and i’ll critique it in a flash~</p>

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<p>I’d love to critique your essay!</p>

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<p>i’ll try to read it quickk!</p>

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<p>I am currently working on mine! :slight_smile: I would love to read yoursss and provide you with feedback. Read mine too?</p>

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<p>ill read it; pm me!</p>

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<p>i’ll read it</p>

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<p>i’ll read it!</p>