Help/critique on optional essay?

<p>would anyone be willing to read my 5-sentence optional essay?</p>

<p>I’ll read it, just PM me.</p>

<p>Sure, I’ll read it. PM me!</p>

<p>I’ll read it, PM it over.</p>

<p>I’ll read it, ahah, PM it to me.</p>

<p>Yeah sure, PM it over</p>