Help critique/proofread my personal statemennts

College Essays
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<p>Would anyone take a minute to fix any grammatical errors/critique my personal statements. This includes Prompt #1 and 2.
Thanks, I appreciate it :)</p>

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<p>Sure. PM me.</p>

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<p>bump
still need help :&lt;/p>

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<p>can u read mine also…i’ll pm you now</p>

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<p>anyone wants to help me fix grammatical errors.
thanks</p>

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<p>bump, still looking for help :(</p>

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<p>I’d be happy to, if you want. PM me.</p>