help deferred international!!!

<p>Hi everyone! .I am an international applicant from Nepal. I applied ED1 to Kenyon and was deferred. could anyone go through my stats and help me identify what I should do to tell kenyon that I am still very interested and would like to attend if accepted.
My stats are</p>

<p>SAT- C.R-660,Maths-780,Writing-660
TOEFL -112
Classes -Cambridge A Levels;got As in Physics and General Paper and Bs in Biology,Chemistry and Maths
ECs -
Member of Prefect Council(Grade 12)
Member of Science Club(12)
Member of Social Service Club(12)
House Captain(10)
Established a library in a very remote part of Nepal;around 10000 books
School Yearbook - editor, grade 12
Very strong recommendation
guess my personal essay was a bit on the wrong side; looked like two personal essays without a proper connection(according to my English teacher.)I believed in my essay and sent it anyway.
Hope I get some suggestions.</p>

<p>i am surprised why didnt u get in !</p>

<p>oh my goodness karkip you got deferred?????</p>

<p>karkip i too applied ed to Kenyon but got deferred. think manasm told you about another ed applicant to kenyon from nepal. well best of luck.</p>

<p>feri materials haru send gara na... aba supplement haru pani dherai submit gara....ani dammi huncha.... essay change gara.... ....tara i'm also surprised why u didn't get in</p>