Help desperately wanted for Common App Essay

<p>I'm applying to the following schools with this Common App essay:</p>

<p>Stanford
UPenn (ED)
Cornell
Northwestern
Dartmouth
JHU</p>

<p>Is anyone willing to read it?</p>

<p>No HS students, please </p>

<p>Thanks</p>

<p>I can read it if you want. I’m out of HS since last year.</p>

<p>I’ll take a look. PM me.</p>

<p>I’d will read it, and give you my honest opinion.</p>

<p>pm me…</p>

<p>pm me as well</p>