<p>Hi everyone,</p>
<p>I was hoping one of you could help me edit this essay. I have done most of it and the hard stuff. I would love it if you guys could look over the essay for commas, run-on’s and places were I could be more fluid and have better word choice.</p>
<p>This is for UOI, it had to be under 300 words and I currently have it at 297.</p>
<p>Please let me know if any of you could help me.
Thank you</p>