Help edit/revise my Topic A essay please ... can help edit in return

Colleges and Universities A-Z Texas A&M University
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<p>The topic is the Statement of Purpose. [Rather, this is your opportunity to address the admissions committee directly and to let us know more about you as an individual, in a manner that your transcripts and other application information cannot convey.]</p>

<p>I have problems with the verb tense.
I'm bad with using have, has, and had also.</p>

<p>Major: Petroleum Engineer </p>

<p>Fall 2013 Transfer Applicant.</p>

<p>Reply/PM me email if you can lend a helping set of eyes, Thanks!</p>

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<p>This is totally unrelated, but when you go to the scholarships part on the application and click available scholarships, does the foundation excellence award say that is past its deadline??</p>

<p>and if you want i could revise your essay</p>

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<p>I haven’t really started the Application yet. You mind giving me your email? Essay is long and will look sloppy in PM. Do you have your essay? I see that you’re doing PetE also.</p>